Hi there everyone!
Today I will show you what I have been doing, Eid day!
If you want to know more, swim through
the drawing to see!
Do you like it?
Which one do you like the best?
Would you like to try doing it?
BYE
Thursday, 28 May 2020
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Hi Zahrah I am Alvin from Rimu class! I really like your blog it seems like you have to draw on your hand and I think that will look awsome! but the thing is that I think you need to make you writing a bit bigger because I cant really read it. but other than that Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Zahrah, Its Ethan here. When are you coming to school plz come back we miss you lots.
ReplyDeleteI like the way all of your information I did not know about thisπ±π±
This is a great post but next time try to write more. Great job πππ
Bye for now Ethan π’π’
P.S. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please come back to school we miss you π’π’π’π’
Kia Ora Zahrah I am Olivia B from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good and cool blog it was really good to read through and the writting was a cool colour but next time you could think about making the writting bigger are making it bold because some of the words were hard for me to read so I couldn't really understand it also maybe next time on the top you could write more about the google drawing
Why did you do it on Eid day
HI OLIVIA!
DeleteThanks for your creative comment, it helped a lot for me to think.
How is school going anyway?
Thanks for spelling MY NAME CORRECTLY!
CYA,Zahrah!ππ
Hi Zarah, It is Olivia P from Rimu. I love your google drawing it looks really nice and cool with the henna art is it henna art?. I have had one on the back of my hand. I Liked the big heart in the middle it must be very special to you.Maybe next time oyu could add a bit more writing because I think for a year 7 you can do better.
ReplyDeleteGreat Work
Bye.
Hi Olivia P!
DeleteIt is cool, nice and great to hear for you doing henna.
Yes, I did see you at school when you came with it.
And please, please spell my name correctly.
Bye
Hi Zahrah,
ReplyDeleteIt Mykiala here!
I love your blog it is creative.
I really like the google drawing and some of the words you used.
Next time you could re-read it because in some parts it doesn't make sense.
Is Eid-Day fun?
What do they do on it?
I would like to try it.
Anyway Great job.
BYE!
MYKIALA YMS!
Kia ora, Mykiala!
DeleteThanks for commenting and saying my blog post is creative.
Thanks for telling me to keep an eye on my words so they make sense.
Thanks, Zahrah!
Hi Zaharah
ReplyDeleteIt is very cool, it has a lot to learn on what you do as a family and friends and I would love to try it.
I do not get the second question what do you mean by which one do you like the best.
I would love to try doing it. Where did you do it?
Kind regards
Michaela
Hi Michaela!
DeleteIt is good to see that you would love to try doing eid day.
What I meant was which one of these eid stuff would you like to try.
By the way, my name spelled like Zahrah!
Hope you get it now, Zahrah!
Hey Zahrah It's Delilah here from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteWe have been missing you so much it is not boring it's fun it is really cool but the sad thing is that we have to stay 1 metre away from each other so you can still play on the playground put you just can't touch anyone which is a pane but it is still fun.
PS.COME BACK WE MISS YOU !
Delilah
Hi Delilah!
DeleteI know that it looks sad for you to not sit with your friends but worry at least you get to see your friends.
Thanks for the comment to tell me how school is going and how it looks like.
Thanks,Zahrah!
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have added a google drawing, and explained what Eid day is.
Did you think about added it into a google slide instead of a google drawing.
Next time, you could add it into a google slide instead of a google drawing.
Kind Regards Jorja.
HI, Jorja!
DeleteI did think about it, I did a google drawing because I always do a slide.
Have a good time,Zahrah!
Hi zahrah, it me peter. That is a good blog post.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post.have you being doing it too?
I like your post, next time check your spelling next time!
When are you going to came back?
comment on some peoples blogs in the class.
Bye
Hi Peter!
DeleteThanks for the comment!
I will try to make my spelling great.
I might come back next Monday?π π²
Goodbye, Zahrah
OH!
DeleteCAPITAL....
LETTERS!
OK, PETER!
FOR THE NAMES!
THANKS,ZAHRAH!
Hi Zarah! It's Hana, remember? Because I hope you do ;-;
ReplyDeleteI just want to say that WE ALL MISS YOU. We all hope you come back to school, because school is "awesome" as Miss Rennell said. -_-
Anyways, about the blog post. The google drawing is creative, I like it! I never knew about eid day. It seems quite interesting! Religions are very interesting and cool if you look into them!
Sadly, the google drawing isn't really showing the words very clearly. So, perhaps you could look into that. But, I think that I can make out what the words say. I think that it says things about eid day marking the end of the month or something like that.
To improve, you could like I said, look into making the words bigger, or having the google drawing not be as blurry. Other than that, the blog post is wonderful!
Keep up the fantastic work Zarah!
-Hana
P.S. Please come back to school, WE MISS YOU! ;-;
... I meant ZAHRAH. Not Zarah...
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DeleteHi Hana, don't worry... I haven't forgotten you!
DeleteI hope school is fun and awesome because one day I might come to school.
I will try to fix my blog post and also make it bigger.
By the way, thanks for spelling my name correctly!
Be Back!
Zahrah!
Hi Zahrah,
ReplyDeleteIts me Alan from yaldhurst model school. Hope you did not forget yaldhurst model school.
Anyway your photo was really creative and informative. I really liked it. If you want you can write some more so that we can know some more about Eid day. And by the way I think I had heard about Eid day before.
Kind regards
Alan
Hi Alan!
DeleteI still have not forgotten school....well, one day I will come school.
I will see what I can do about writing more, if I could.
If you have heard of it, please let me know.
Thanks!
Zahrah
Hi Zarah, It's me Lucy from yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteI love how you told the reader loads of facts about eid day that might teach people something new.
PLEASE COME BACK TO SCHOOL IM BEGGING YOU������
Maybe you could add a slideshow instead of a google drawing.
Kind Regards
From Lucy
Hi Lucy!
DeleteI know, that you want me to come to school again...I might, who knows?
Maybe one day you could try doing it, also with your family.
I will see what I could do about the slide.
Coming soon, Zahrah!
Oh, Lucy!
DeleteI almost forgot to tell you, that my name is not spelled correctly.
I name is spelled like Z A H R A H !
Hi Zahrah Renae here.
ReplyDeleteBe ready to check mail because we spamming you.
This is a great post, I like how you said for the introduction: swim through the drawing to see.
Maybe next time you could do these easy tips: you need to re-read your blog before posting because the are missing letters and a enter the didn't need to be used.
I hope you're having a good time.
Bye.
from Renae
Hi Renae it's Zahrah, thanks for the helpful comment.
DeleteI will read my blog again, to check the mistakes.
And, I will not forget anymore!
Replying back, Zahrah!
Hello Zahrah. I like how you teached us what Eid day is. Next time, you could say if you like it. I think that this blog is very good because of the google drawing. Goodbye, Max.
ReplyDeleteHi Max, thank you for your comment!
DeleteYes, I do like every year of eid day, because you to visit so many people.
You get me so many yummy snacks, so other people can try it.
Also before eid, we could do henna if we want to.
Goodbye,Zahrah!