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Wednesday, 23 May 2018

Painting a Picture in the reader's head

WALT use our senses in our writing to paint a picture in the reader's head.

Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scene in your head?


I was in the dark, creepy, scary forest. I was lonely. I heard a sound a heard birds singing, animals stomping, but I fell and I hurt myself. I ran. I smelt something and even I taste something.” I smell fresh air, rotting leaves, animal manure I taste pollution.