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Tuesday 21 April 2020

Under the sea, under the weed?

Konichiwa!
Today I will be showing you this blog post about one of my writings.
If you want more of these writings or stories, you could
check my other blog posts about stories.
Here is my DLO!


I wrote this story by looking 
at a picture from google.

Have you ever got a picture from google to write?
Did you ever blogged about your writing things?
Have you wrote about water stuff?

BYE!

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2 comments:

  1. Allan Robertson22 April 2020 at 13:42

    Hi Zahrah


    I love the way you introduced your story by tempting your readers to read it to find out what they would find.

    How amazing to find a giant jewel in the ocean. Did you imagine what they might do with the jewel? Perhaps they set it in a crown or had it divided into many small jewels.

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  2. Ms Lange24 April 2020 at 15:59

    Salaam Zahrah
    I like how you 'left us hanging at the end', in other words left the ending a mystery so we wonder what happened next.
    It would be amazing to find something like that in the ocean and hard to keep it a secret!
    Would you buy a house? I would and I would try to do some good for others with it.
    What else would you do? Would you keep a little piece of it and get some jewellery made?
    Keep up the good work! How do you say good work in Farsi?
    Have a great weekend
    Ms L

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